I've edited your very kooky story a little to make it easier to read on the blog. Well done on your exciting use of punctuation and please make sure you keep showing off your great writing skills. Perhaps you could write one of your recounts next time?
Nice little poem Joby, sometimes that scenario seems very likely if you look at the full set of search results on Google, still an excellent learning rescource though. I think it's brill to see more of the children posting on here, it gives a good indication as to how well they're all doing and their overall enthusiasm for learning both in and out of school.
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Hi Joby,
I've edited your very kooky story a little to make it easier to read on the blog. Well done on your exciting use of punctuation and please make sure you keep showing off your great writing skills. Perhaps you could write one of your recounts next time?
Miss Othacehe
Nice little poem Joby, sometimes that scenario seems very likely if you look at the full set of search results on Google, still an excellent learning rescource though. I think it's brill to see more of the children posting on here, it gives a good indication as to how well they're all doing and their overall enthusiasm for learning both in and out of school.
I will on Friday becaule i'm
wrting...ANOTHER RANDOM STORY!
(teeheehee!):(:(:(:(: Smile face!
I like your random story.
I like the Random story Joby.PAIGE
(:
I like your random story Joby.From Hannah.
Fab story Joby.Paige
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